Write about the following topic.
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Stepping into this industrialization, there is lasting debate about whether the economic boom plays the most crucial part in the whole apparatus of most governments or development in other fields is equivalent to that in the economy. I am of the opinion that the importance of the advancement in politics or education should be considered as similar to the economy.
On the one hand, a country with economic prosperity obviously stands a chance of improving the livelihood and living quality of its society. First of all, the rate of the underprivileged and the slums in some hidden corners of some areas might be reduced to the minimum level, which may lead to progress in other types of aspects. Having an inexorable growth in the economy, that nation would have enough power to stabilize the equality among its social hierarchy and eliminate the sexual discrimination between females and males. Secondly, it is the development of the national economy that can support all markets to meet the demands of residents, which leads to improving people's social life and awareness. Undoubtedly, to strengthen the power of the defense force, a huge sum of money should be provided for the military to create and purchase high-tech equipment and cutting-edge weapons. Consequently, other fields of a nation could also be transformed into a new level.
Conversely, I would strongly argue that prosperity in politics and education should be taken into consideration as the same pattern as the economy. Firstly, it is irrefutable that the economy has a massive impact on the globe, but along with the economic boom, politics still has a lot of unstable situations that may be one major factor contributing to the collapse of a thriving economy. The richer people are, the more greedy they are that can make corruption happen. Therefore, the progress in politics should parallel that in the economy. Moreover, the basis for long-term economic progress is the advancement in education because the strength of the economy of a country could only be sustained by the next well-trained generation. As an example, to educate a new scientific team to renew some invention's system, that team should be trained thoroughly to be ready for that mission.
To sum up, I believe that the government should regard progress in other types of subjects as equal to that in the economy, though the economic field is the very priority.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 801, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'inventions'' or 'invention's'?
Suggestion: inventions'; invention's
...ate a new scientific team to renew some inventions system, that team should be trained tho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08312342569 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93844883117 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51637279597 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 655.2 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3748614556 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.533333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4666666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156302421426 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540110805293 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441504873388 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11333351727 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322947336887 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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