Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?
It is a fact that entertainment plays a significant role in our lives. Nowadays, the issue of how much celebrities are paid too much money is a hot topic. Some people think that they deserve high salaries, while others argue that they are overpaid. I strongly disagree with the notion that celebrities are paid excessively, and I have several reasons for my stance.
Some people think that celebrities deserve high salaries because they work very hard and often have no private lives. Reaching the top in music, acting, or sports takes a lot of dedication and time. Additionally, the entertainment industry is very competitive, with only a few people becoming famous. Their success brings a lot of money, and their salaries show the demand for their jobs. When people buy their music, watch their movies, or attend their events, it shows that society appreciates what they do.
On the other hand, many people believe that celebrities are overpaid, especially when compared to essential workers such as nurses and teachers, whose salaries are much lower. Celebrities often have natural talent and do not need to go to school for many years. On the contrary, doctors and engineers have to undergo a lot of training to help society. Additionally, their lavish homes and luxury cars show a large gap in income. This difference leads to questions about whether entertainment should be valued more highly than essential services.
In conclusion, it’s true that celebrities work hard and have their own challenges; however, the gap between their salaries and those of key workers us to wide to ignore. We need to think about our values and how we value different jobs. So I disagree that celebrities are paid too much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01048951049 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6973909872 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8266918148 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2941176471 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202874080404 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789907209578 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136335874828 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141208529109 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822011063137 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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