More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch tv programs to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
Recently, people are living in a technological advanced era where they prefer to gain knowledge on the internet rather than traditional methods such as reading magazines or watching Tv. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I shall discuss some of the reasons why the subject is so popular and some of the challenges to be overcome.
On the one hand, the option to use the internet to achieve the news can exert many disadvantages. The first drawback of this is harmful for teenagers who prefer to spend almost all their time on the internet for playing games or watching films rather than reading news. Additionally, readers are difficult to determine information what is true or what is false, since there are so many sources on the social media which most people prefer rather caring the rate of view than the content’s information. Another essential point to consider is privacy online, this is because users are required to provide their private information when signing up. Hence, there can be a lack of privacy online for users.
On the other hand, I believe that these activities and this idea might be associated with the environment when less producing magazines or newspapers, which also decreases the utilization of paper. Furthermore, readers have various choices, since there are so many subjects such as cooking, travel, fashion, finance, and so on which people can choose the most they are interested in. Moreover, people can save their money when using e-book. It is extremely suitable for students who do not have too many conditions to approach global sources of information easily like that.
In conclusion, meanwhile, the statements are both pros and cons, but I believe that we are living in a developing society. Using the internet to read news or gain information as a method that people need to employ more than.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98101265823 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68772065754 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.586607109 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171665349326 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604420229305 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672404364497 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116088361013 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518639635121 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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