In the modern world, mobile and smartphone use has become universal in most parts of the world. Although there are clearly many advantages of this technology, there are many who believe it also brings many disadvantages. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
In recent years, information technology has developed significantly; therefore, mobile phones are becoming indispensable parts in our daily life. In my opinion, this development has both positive and negative influences on people.
It is true that information technohlogy provides people the convenience. The high demand of people for social connecting and applying the new technology in working can be met easily. In particular, in the Covid-19 period, the community tends to use social networks such as Facebook, Instagram with the higher frequency, so mobile phones are tools which can help them communicate with others. By using this small device, people can reduce the risk of infection and still keep contact with their social relationships without meeting face-to-face.
On the other hand, smartphones also have negative impacts on human, especially young people. Internet plays an important part in the daily life of adolescents, however, sometimes their role become outrageous. This can be seen in the case of the smartphone addiction which is the main factor causing the increase in the short-sightedness of youngsters. Not only do cellphone affect badly on the eyesight, they also reduce the learning ability of children. For those reasons, parents and schools should have the proper sollutions to improve this serious situation.
In conclusion, although mobiles and smartphones can help people improve
their life quality, they should take the negative impacts of those modern devices into consideration
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and smartphones can help people improve their life quality, they should take the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6347826087 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00885900537 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647826086957 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1834024443 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126339604782 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438242819723 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252892927006 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734012814949 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331435965102 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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