You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
Organizing global sport competiton is a topic of debate.In my view, that worldwide's sport event have a good influnence to nation while others feel it will influence in the opposite side. The merits of both arguments will be analyzed before a conclusion is decided upon.
On the one side, it is facially to see that host of international speacial occasion in sporting for several reasons,one of which our sporting team have a benefit for homeyard. This is beacause general public in one nation just familar with that country they are born. For example, America can easily get used to being with a winter season. As a consquence, our participants in this event will not difficult to win enemy and get sport achievement to that nation. Furthermore, Another reason for this is that make tourist spot attraction to abroad people.This can be explained by being more people likely take a token to see competiotion of thier teams if you are the place where the over the world sport event occurs. Resulting, nation will increase the rate of tourists visit to.
However, on the other side of this argument, it must be remembered that it would have a inclement effect on country in some reasons. Initially, goverment need to consume plenty of money to organize such a big event due to this contest has a value for everyone in all country over the world so we need to monumental decorate and celebrate for some luxorious items.Take world cup event is an example for this issue. Thus, for each season, resident shall pay a high tax than normal for this event and will decrease thier monthly saving. Moreover, the second one which is creating chance for crime and terriorism to make harm to cheerleader or spectacular in the stadium for the reason which goon can disguise to normal person and get in stadium for bad purpose.It can lead to put resident in danger of death.
Ultimately, I definitely think that it would the best solution for getting a host for this because of a lot of pros. Thus, it is disagreed that there are disavantage outweigh the advantage.It is predicted that more and more nation will try to get enough condition to be a host for sporting event games.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...l sport competiton is a topic of debate.In my view, that worldwides sport event ha...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...occasion in sporting for several reasons,one of which our sporting team have a benef...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... benefit for homeyard. This is beacause general public in one nation just familar with that co...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ourist spot attraction to abroad people.This can be explained by being more people l...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...t must be remembered that it would have a inclement effect on country in some rea...
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Suggestion: Take
... and celebrate for some luxorious items.Take world cup event is an example for this ...
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Suggestion: It
...rson and get in stadium for bad purpose.It can lead to put resident in danger of d...
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Suggestion: It
... are disavantage outweigh the advantage.It is predicted that more and more nation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77393617021 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64473386015 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0786069598 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226193006813 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750508647653 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407519453175 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134299717662 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171686453099 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...l sport competiton is a topic of debate.In my view, that worldwides sport event ha...
^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...occasion in sporting for several reasons,one of which our sporting team have a benef...
^^^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... benefit for homeyard. This is beacause general public in one nation just familar with that co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ourist spot attraction to abroad people.This can be explained by being more people l...
^^^^
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t must be remembered that it would have a inclement effect on country in some rea...
^
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Take
... and celebrate for some luxorious items.Take world cup event is an example for this ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 759, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...rson and get in stadium for bad purpose.It can lead to put resident in danger of d...
^^
Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... are disavantage outweigh the advantage.It is predicted that more and more nation ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77393617021 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64473386015 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0786069598 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226193006813 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750508647653 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407519453175 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134299717662 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171686453099 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.