This issue about measuring a person's successes by defined goals is not such a controversial discussion if you have reviewed the last achievements in psychological science about reaching to goal and the influence of having them in mind. Beside some metaphysical ideas which are ample everywhere even as CDs and small e-books available for download. These materials try to prove to you, all the following events which you are going to experience once before has been created in your mind by means of your self-unconsciousness. Some people believe and even they are going to explain their experience about the secret formula of self-consciousness and how much it had the influence on their life. But I believe the story is not a secret and nothing here needs to be revealed. Simply I will interpret what is going on when you set some goals for yourself. I provided three reasons for you here. First, your mind will turn off all distractions when you set even a short-term goal for yourself. Second, the mind plays a role as a vacuum and it will absorb anything could span. And the last point, before you proceed to do the further action for your goal this is your mind which is going to direct you to set your goal.
When you set a goal in your mind, somehow you are ordering your mind that among lots of information and connection, your task is to select the related correspondings to my goal and filter other irrelated information. Turning off all distractions means focusing on something that is significant for you. If you have an imaginary picture and imagine mind as an absorbing source of thought, you will find something weird here. Our mind is going to attract anything or we can have a control on that. If you monitor your mind for a while and write anything which flashes in your mind and you try monitoring what is going towards you, you will find the interest relation. for instance, if you set your goal to find a job related to computer programming after 1 year with great income, don`t doubt that after one week you will notice to an advertisement about learning an management computer programming. So you didn't create something like that and the advertisement would be there after one week again but the caliber of your attention shifted after setting a related goal in your mind.
Secondly, we have to know whenever you focus on something or don't concentrate your mind is going to absorb anyway. Without concentration as mentioned in preceding paragraph, you can not have a permanent control over your mind. If we accept this theory that in any sort of situation your mind will vacuum other thoughts and signals, somehow you are going to agree with this that your failure even is programmed by your mind. So for making the mind energy concentrate on some defined treatments, behavior and achievements, you have to set some goals for yourself, for when you don't have a plan which has been set to your mind, you are prone to have a failure in following steps because your mind will just vacuum based on its interest.
At last point, I want to say I believe in that our mind will have two significant role which one of them is positive and the other one is negative. In a positive manner, it will be a accompany beside you, and it is going to be going faster than you to analyze the path and order to your unconsciousness to select the corresponding treatments corresponding to your goals and in contrast, negative side will start to work as a friction force against all of your actions and sometimes people define it a bad-chance for themselves.
In the conclusion, I believe in this important fact that your mind job is not to help you on the exam to have calculations or analyze a physics problem. It's a manager inside of your brain who will need your first instruction which is your goals even as the daily list for the thing that you are going to do.
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Suggestion: a
...tice to an advertisement about learning an management computer programming. So you...
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...management computer programming. So you didnt create something like that and the adve...
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Suggestion: It's; It is
...culations or analyze a physics problem. Its a manager inside of your brain who will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in contrast, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 102.0 33.0505617978 309% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3209.0 2235.4752809 144% => OK
No of words: 686.0 442.535393258 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6778425656 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11777311996 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7537585229 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413994169096 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 982.8 704.065955056 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.7047742973 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.36 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.44 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398036956523 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149032278342 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826038387843 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270186008019 0.150359130593 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564710740049 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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