Some people say taxes should be spent on health care. Other people say that there are more important priorities for taxpayers’ money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Increasing population has put immense pressure on the health care system of many developing countries such as India. Leading to a debate whether revenue collected by government should be spent on health care or on other priorities such as education, housing and defense. According to me, spending resources only on healthcare would be incorrect as other sectors are equally vital for development of citizens and their safe keeping.
Healthy citizens is a sign of healthy society, which is crucial for development of a nation. Firstly, the rapid growth of population in the last three decades has led to diseases such as Tuberculosis, which has claimed life's of more than one lac citizens annually in India. Secondly, medical treatments are becoming increasingly expensive and are beyond the reach of a common man. Therefore, it is suggested by some citizens that tax money should be spent on healthcare. So that, affordable hospitals can be built and basic treatments can be provided free of cost.
Others believe government should spend it on education and housing, as most of the citizens fall ill due to lack of education about personal hygiene and living in unhygienic conditions because they are cheap to rent or own. This can help in reducing the current burden on the health care system. Moreover, defense is considered of prime importance in today's day and age. Most of the countries are on the brink of war, either for trade or due to refugee crisis. Hence, it is necessary to spend on defense infrastructure to safe guard the borders as well as its citizens.
In my opinion, government should allocate equally for all sectors. Prioritizing anyone would be incorrect, as they are equally important for the well being of citizens and the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...such as education, housing and defense. According to me, spending resources only on healthcare ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07216494845 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80825616932 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.100605822 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205973182445 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670703059499 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604135717932 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1237080156 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308958766457 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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