The line graph illustrates information about the expenditure on books in 4 countries from 1995 to 2005.
The country which is the most spending money on books over a decade was Germany. The figure is given in millions US dollars.
In 1995, the rank of expenditure on books was Germany, France, Italy and Austria respectively. There was a fluctuation on spending in Germany over 10 years. The book expenditure in Germany started at 80 in 1995. There was a moderate increase by 10 to 90 between 1995 and 1999 before dropping back to 85 in 2003. Germany then spent more money on books until hit a peak at 95 in 2005. For France, they used more money on books in each year from 1995 to 2005 and reached a highest point at 75.
Money spent in Italy began at 50 in 1995. It rose slightly to 55 and then declined to the same point as in 1995. After 1999, There was a steady went up from 50 to 62 in 2005. Austria used money only 30 in 1995. Spending stayed the same for 2 years after there was an increase from 30 to 40 between 1995 and 1999. The expenditure on books saw a dramatic rise by 20 to 60 in 2003 which was more spending than in Italy and it still went up to hit a highest point at 71 in 2005. Therefore, the rank was changed to Germany, France, Austria and Italy respectively in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ney on books over a decade was Germany. The figure is given in millions US dollars....
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Line 5, column 469, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...each year from 1995 to 2005 and reached a highest point at 75. Money spent in ...
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Line 7, column 445, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...an in Italy and it still went up to hit a highest point at 71 in 2005. Therefore,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 33.7804878049 175% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27530364372 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39521506103 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0704215251 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.4375 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37838705062 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141126912715 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976458754678 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23298833334 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829248097296 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 61.2550243902 147% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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