The six pie charts give detailed information about the proportion of water consumption for industrial, agriculture, and domestic purposes in six different areas. Looking more closely at the chart, it is obvious from the data that water used for industrial purpose seems to be the main consumption in North America and Europe, but others are for agriculture purpose.
According to the graphs, water is consumed by industrial activities at approximately half of the total consumption in North America and Europe. The second purpose of water used in both North America and Europe is for agriculture which accounts for 39% and 32% respectively. These two countries consume water for household between 13% and 15%.
On another chart, more than three-quarter of the water consumption in the rest countries is for agricultural purpose except South America at 71%. Domestic usages in South America, Africa, and Central Asia are the second water used at 19%, 9% and 7% respectively, but this purpose is the least important usage for South East Asia around 7%. All of these counties consume water for industrial activities ranging from 5% to 12%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...South America, Africa, and Central Asia are the second water used at 19%, 9% and 7%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21195652174 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87396216988 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1260623102 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235708301782 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119143250118 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071861755848 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184222877829 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748746320722 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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