Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that quality has more impact than quantity because of lower quality in each work or services are not acceptable. Contrary to this popular belief there are still those who argue that it is more important to doing everything faster than others and if created some mistake this problem can be solved in the future. I to a great extent, disagree with this idea that it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to working slower and quality.
first and foremost, today's quantity is not just the important factor to success. for example, the new companies that producing self-phone or digital instrument, every month produce a lot of the number of new models to the commercial but the quality of their products are not comparable with the very old famous company that produces high-quality od production but renew their products with the longer interval. the new work company identified their products with a lot of options and config but in the real when costumers using from this production substantiated several problems or contrast with their claim.
on another significant fact, that should be taken into consideration is that most of the time it is impossible to recompense or rebound the mistake. for example, in a research project that needs a lot of budgets, even a small mistake in calculating or regarding somethings can be led to very big damage. for example, to solve the problem of parasitic insects that caused to damage to a kind of trees. some of the scientists designed a kind of virus that can be led to killing this only this only this insect but not other. unfortunately, because of they are hurry to getting positive results they did this work but the result was a calamity. and this virus extended to other areas and create a lot of damage to the environment.
finally, yet importantly, solving the problem of time is very simple than revising mistakes quality. for example, it is possible to use more people undertaking on the important issue that should be done quickly.
on the basis of the reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that because of things that remained in the memory of people in the society is the perfect result so working slowly and make sure everything is correct are more important just rate of working and output. because of the impact of quality on user and society and we cannot back into past time to remove a lot of mistakes and also, prevention is better than treating.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...methings can be led to very big damage. for example, to solve the problem of parasi...
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...ortant just rate of working and output. because of the impact of quality on user and so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, so, still, for example, kind of, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81733021077 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62302191272 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487119437939 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4378283182 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5625 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6875 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268897046811 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882210928216 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120850976344 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162318305004 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133384694766 0.0645574589148 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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