Some people believe that children should go to extra classes after school. Others, however, think that children should spend that time playing instead. Discuses both views and give your own opinion.
It has been suggested by some of the individuals that young adolescents should be attended for the additional classes soon after the college. But, the opponents say it is utterly useless and better to utilize that moment for playing. However, this essay would discuss both the conflict views.
To begin with, as we know, owing to the high population of offspring in the present decade, there is a high demand for enrolment at schools. Even though, students manage to get the admission for the college, in a classroom there are about more than fifty heads counts. Consequently, teachers are confronting to concentrate on all the children in a single classroom, unless government failed to come out with unique solutions to provide more facilities to the schools. As a result, young adolescent engages in afternoon to focus their education individually, which facilitates them to escalate their knowledge enormously.
Moreover, by attending for the private classes provides more opportunity for the students to collaborate with the others, which help them to share their own views but also able to socialize and adjust themselves according to the environment. For instance, nowadays in most of the colleges do not train the children to face for the exam papers but in the extra classes the tutors are highly focused on the exam papers, where student would not face any difficulties during the examinations.
On the contrary, nowadays, most of the parents believe, having too much of extra classes, which have caused detrimental effects to the offspring. To illustrate, soon after the schools the children are exhausted and most of them were diagnosed with mental disorders. Thus, it is inevitable to relax themselves mentally and physically but also to keep their health fit. In addition, it is waste of injecting a large amount of money for additional classes, that money could be invested to purchase educational games, where it will help them to grow their knowledge.
In conclusion, the aforementioned anecdotal evidence precisely justified the import of both the views. However, in my opinion, I would believe young adolescent required extra classes rather than completely depend only in school education, which facilitates them to pop out unique knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
It has been suggested by some of the individuals that young adolescents shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28453038674 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87254167608 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5685161374 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.533333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148776108432 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459801361684 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482102573638 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848971469064 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405278846278 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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