By the dawn of the 20th century, the industrial revolution & its multinational industrial companies trailed the developed countries into a new era of wealth & civilization, yet, I do believe that its reckless, inconsiderate & even greedy industry-related polluting activities are putting the whole world into danger & even the whole mankind into distinction, & in this essay I will discuss & explain this.
Some of the "Pro-industrialization" dispute the fact that the outburst of industrial activities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Some
...essay I will discuss & explain this. Some of the 'Pro-industrialization' dispu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at the outburst of industrial activities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 438.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 72.0 315.596192385 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08333333333 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.91295063024 4.20363070211 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.63705737701 2.80592935109 165% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 176.041082164 30% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 134.1 506.74238477 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.0 49.4020404114 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.0 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 7.06120827912 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816754405617 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493214313619 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493214313619 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493214313619 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493214313619 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.58 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 78.4519038076 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 24.0 9.78957915832 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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