Question: You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of visit.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:-Explain the important-Apologize for the situation-Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Rajan,
It was pleasure to receive letter from you as always and you mentioned the date wise plan for my trip to London. I am very excited about London visit but it seems like that I would not be able to travel to United Kingdom on scheduled dates.
As you know that my sister’s wedding was scheduled on 11th July’18 but is being preponed because she and her partner have been offered handsome opportunity with significant financial gains. Therefore, both decided to marry on 15th May’18. Sarah is my only sister and I do not want to disappoint in any case. Even my parents have already started the shopping and booking for venue. They have especially given me the decoration responsibilities and of course I will be best man for my sister during wedding.
First of all, I want to apologize for changing the plans which we made so long back. I do not have any words to express my situation so I decided to not to cancel the visit but just postpone it by two weeks. I can plan to come on 31st May instead of 15th May. I have already spoken to airlines and they comprehended my situation and agree to change the dates.
I would like to know if you are convenient on changed dates. Let me know your opinion. Looking forward to your reply
Best Regards,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rajan, It was pleasure to receive letter from y...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o come on 31st May instead of 15th May. I have already spoken to airlines and the...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tuation and agree to change the dates. I would like to know if you are convenien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, therefore, of course, you know, first of all, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54310344828 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61118683181 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5327309947 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2857142857 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138499089589 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047668927399 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041141805118 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975027502433 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449663421743 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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