You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach Englishoverseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter Tell them where you saw the advertisement Explain why you would like to go Describe the skills that you have that you think wou

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English
overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter
Tell them where you saw the advertisement
Explain why you would like to go
Describe the skills that you have that you think would help

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter in order to apply for teaching English abroad as a volunteer. I saw you Ad in Dreams jobs Magazine issue number eight.

I have graduated kn some study courses n teaching English and i have two years experience of teaching English in Steven public school in my country. I am easy going moreover, I can work under pressure and without supervision. I have taught English language to different age groups. As you can see from my CV, I have learned both general and business English.

I would like to apply my skills in your company and i see that working a broad is advantageous for my career. In addition, involving with different cultures is enchanting experience.

If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to arrange an interview. I am looking forward to discussing my credentials with you personally

Thank you for your time and consideration

Yours faithfully
Adam

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ms jobs Magazine issue number eight. I have graduated kn some study courses n ...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in Steven public school in my country. I am easy going moreover, I can work unde...
^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...under pressure and without supervision. I have taught English language to differe...
^
Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to apply my skills in your company and i see that working a broad is advantageou...
^
Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssing my credentials with you personally Thank you for your time and consideratio...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hank you for your time and consideration Yours faithfully Adam
^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and consideration Yours faithfully Adam
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92546583851 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86663290258 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3446965211 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29958775487 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107676968871 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07403854062 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175129421566 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059520598677 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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