It is believed that a large amount of money should be spent on constructing modern railway network especially for very fast trains to connect cities, yet a huge number of people still think that money should be spent on upgrading existing mode of public transport system. In my view, there are both positive and negative elements in this practice.
On the on hand, spending a huge amount of money for constructing the super fast railway lines has numerous benefits along with some disadvantages. Firstly, having super fast railway system between the cities encourage the people to take the their business forward. Moreover, they can easily share the products of one another cities which really help them to be independent form distance cities. Secondly, they should not be bother for finding a job as they can commute to work from one city to another in reasonable time so that they can get their own desire jobs. Finally, people living in the connecting cities make growth in their economy and make their life more luxurious. However, investing larger amount of money just for fast railway system may not help the common people who just do their business within cities and public transport as a means of transportation.
On the other hand, public transport plays a crucial role for making people's life more convenient along with some trade off. Firstly, public transport systems are more frequent and convenient as a result many people could use it on their needs without wasting time for waiting like in railway system. On top of that, government can provide more service in less amount of money compared to railway system. Although, public transport system is quite expensive than rail way system for people who use it.Moreover, public transport is not as secured as railway system because we may have heard some sort accidents to support this statement.
While I believe that it is not completely good idea to spend larger extent of money for fast railway system only, it is good thing to spend reasonable amount of money for upgrading both railway system and public transport system. Moreover, more reliable and cheap source of transportation system should be searched in the near future to give public more reliable services.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, as a result, in my view, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02419354839 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49783551809 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2240721451 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366856099504 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134153114975 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120454902648 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266008963752 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115577847396 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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