Many people believe that they should spend their money to enjoy life at present. Others, however, think that they should save it for the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
whether or not to save money for future is becoming highly controversial. Some people believed that money should be used for enjoying the present life while other people are in favor for using it during the time of need in future. This essay will enlighten both aspects in detail.
On one hand, there are growing number of people who thinks that money must be utilized for entertaining and living the present life in better way. They have reason to believe that comfortable life of present will lead to developed and better life of future. For example a recent study reveals that people who do not care about their future can focus more on the present life and their chances of the success also increases by more than 50 percent. Therefore, these people have valid reason for their argument.
In contract to the people who wish to use money for present are those who are in side of saving money for future. After all, life is not certain and people must have some financial backup to overcome from the difficult situations that can happen going forward. For example, a professor at university of London have given example of people of India who believes in saving money for medical and educational expenses for their families. For all these reasons, there are plenty of people who thinks that keeping money for future is really very important.
whether people should save money for future or not ? Despite of the fact there are people who do not want to keep money for future, many have exemplified that it is mandatory for the future expenses. This essay analysed various reasons why people hold different points of view and whether money must be kept for upcoming expenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, therefore, while, after all, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82068965517 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27392759001 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4063030314 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359359446416 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147039897856 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713009697745 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242699752766 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216419160082 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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