Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
It is well known fact that children are the future of any country and therefore, it is responsibility for any society to make them good human beings. It is argued by some that children habits are replicated from their parents while others believe that they are best taught at schools. This essay will enlighten both views and explain why it is mandatory for parents to take this responsibility.
On one hand, It is believed by many that school's are the best places where students can be provided with proper training with the unique tested techniques. Teacher are trained with the methods that can help student to become better human for society and nation. Children spend most of their time in the school and hence, teacher can easily define the career path of the student by observing them from the class. for example, about 90 percent of students of D.A.V public school, who passed the higher secondary examination have credited their teachers as career mentor.However, children are more mentally connected with their parents and therefore I believe that parents have bigger responsibility.
On other hand, children's are emotionally connected with their parents and hence they treat their parents their role models. It is true that the children are taught first by their parents and they have higher impact on the behaviour of their offspring. There is study which reveals the fact that 80 percent of habits are taken from the parents by their children. I would like to give example of my friend who is short tempered during adverse conditions and he has inherited this character from his father to whom he is watching from birth.
To conclude, although schools are treated the prominent place for educating the children, I advocate it is primary responsibility for the parents to make their children better human being
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03947368421 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57642868416 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6031044739 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2835805598 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112091065747 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061597107075 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181744713486 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00976283025611 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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