In general people do not have a such a close relationship with their neighbors as they did in the past. Why this is so and what can be done to improve contacts with neighbors.
It is well know fact that relation with neighbors is not important as it used to be in past. These days people are becoming selfish and more concerned about their families matters. There are various reasons which arise this problem. This essay will address what those problems are as well as the solutions which can be applied in order to alleviate these issues.
There are various compelling reasons which is responsible for the birth of this kind of situation in modern societies. Firstly, people do not have spare time because of hectic and fast life and interaction within society is reduced because of this. For example, a survey in London reveals that cooperation between the people has been reduced by fifty percent from last decade.In addition, the ambition of maintaining good financial status is also impacting the understanding within the families of any society. In most societies , people tend to socialize based on their financial status.Therefore, problems such as hectic life and socializing based on status are the main reasons which is disturbing the relation between neighbors.
While the problems may seem intractable, there are various solutions available. Societies can organize weekend outing plans of its members as it can give chance to the people to understand each other. For example, a professor at university of Melbourne says that people in Indian societies have very strong understanding with each other despite of different religions and the habit of celebrating all the festivals together has made this possible. Also, societies should create environment where people of different financial status and religions interact with each other. Therefore, organizing events irrespective of religion and status can help people to come close to each other.
As the problems are evidently clear, there are solutions which can be applied to encounter the problems raised because of less importance given to relationship within society. This essay has discussed the main reasons for this behavior are hectic life and disparity based on financial background. This essay also suggested the solutions such as organizing events irrespective of status and religion can be considered to alleviate these problems from the root.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39204545455 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79493880868 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9331511313 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221830563223 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758836705288 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042519033558 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137550813548 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350954318965 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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