Being active on social sites have become a common sight these days due to the advancement of technology. By the appearance of such websites, some people argue that it will affect in a negative way on individual people and society. Nevertheless, one believes that their benefits should not be neglected.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that social media platforms have drawbacks on an individual person as well as local communities. With regards to individuals, people who spend most of their time socializing in cyberspace instead of having a conversation with others face-to-face may become dependent and obsessed with social media to communicate. This could affect their personality including depression and anxiety when they can not access those sites. Furthermore, sharing different ideas through the networking sites potentially cause miss understanding and lead to conflict. It may create a gap and make the society unstable.
On the other hand, the advantages of using social media for individuals and society cannot be overlooked. Nowadays someone has a chance to build unlimited friendship bonds without distance and time obstacles. People could open their insight and exchange their thinking with someone outer their circle community via social media. In addition, social networking platforms also deliver information faster. For instance, important news or warning is received easily and quickly in our grasp through social media application installed on the smartphone. Therefore, communities can take an action immediately to prevent unexpected things.
To summarize, even though social media sites include some disadvantages to each person and community, we should not dismiss all other outstanding aspects as detrimental.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
..., some people argue that it will affect in a negative way on individual people and society. Never...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65019011407 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99230605574 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8818254347 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184413193057 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585842278575 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537557190758 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117270159285 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630686432798 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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