Nowadays in many families, the grandparents are responsible for bringing up children. Is it a good or bad development for grandparents? Give your own opinion and examples.
In today's contemporary era, with changing life styles, the roles of family members are changing. Owing to the hectic schedules of young couples, their children are mostly looked after by the older members of the family. Even though it seems quite relaxing trend at present, in my belief it would have numbers of harmful effect in the longer run for the aged people as they may face problems with their health at this age.
To begin with, such a trend is quite popular in my country due to various reasons, one of the major reasons from these is, lack of time and lots of burden on the younger generation. To elaborate, most of the married couples with children are burdened with sharing financial responsibilities and hence both of them are usually loaded with lot of work as well as constant mental and physical pressure, which make them unable to spare quality time with their children. In this scenario, grandparents are the best option in the family to take care of the children. This will not only help children grow better but will serve a purpose of a healthy and happy time killing activity for old age people too. Moreover, families which do not accept this trend are left with the only option of baby seater or quitting job by any of the parent, in both the cases rearing of children will ultimately suffer with numbers of consequents. So, in this viewpoint having grandparents to raise children is best for children and for themselves too.
However, another angle of the issue is; though grandparents are making efforts to help the parents in taking care of their kids, it is not good for them as they themselves also need a caretaker. Firstly, they are senior citizens and their age is also affecting their health. They usually need to visit the hospital for some or the other illnesses such as heart disease, high blood pressure, and others. Apart from this, at this age, they have already dedicated their whole life for family and this time should be for their own relaxation or enjoyment which must not be spoiled with extra burden of responsibilities. Moreover, it is difficult for them to handle young kids in helping them complete homework, letting them dress up properly for school and teaching any techy gadgets. Sometimes, children may be overpampered and become pervert or stubborn when their all demands are served, which is usually controlled by parents but quite easy and common with grandparents. Hence, looking from this side, considering the age, their rights to enjoyment and the way children are raised by grandparents, such a trend can be really harmful.
To recapitulate, I strongly feel grandparents ought to be given their enough part to enjoy their retire life at that age and must not be thrusted upon by any more extra responsibilities, instead parents need to be more calculative in managing time and work to look after their children, to make them competent enough for the latest world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, well, apart from, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 501.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8502994012 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60018788704 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 176.041082164 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512974051896 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 745.2 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1394252444 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.941176471 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4705882353 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162202571682 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642350031111 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064004654593 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999362625482 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422282668929 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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