Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many people argue that their healthy lifestyle is the responsibility of the government while other believe that government has no role in individual’s exercising habits. Although government can contribute significantly to individual’s fitness, this essay believes that it is the individual’s choice to maintain a healthy life style, on which government has no control.
On the one hand, government is considered to provide facilities to ensure that individual leads a healthy life style, these facilities may include parks, jogging tracks, hospitals, gymnasiums, fitness clubs etc. If the government is not providing such facilities, it is obvious that there is no way that their citizens will remain fit and maintain a healthy life style and this can cause them health problems such as obesity. A survey specified in ‘Times Newspaper’ reported that government initiatives in Karachi (a city in Pakistan) for the development of fitness centres and providing subsidized costs to individuals has motivated 50% individuals to exercise in gyms. However, despite the above argument, I believe that government has limited role in improving fitness of their citizen and it is the individual’s responsibility to remain healthy and fit.
On the other hand, it is considered to be a matter of personal attitude and choice to remain fit and healthy and government cannot control a population of millions. In other words, even if the government provide the facilities to maintain a healthy lifestyle, the individual may be lazy enough to avail these options or he/she may not be interested as a matter of choice. Individuals may have their social and official commitments on a priority list and hence, the government cannot monitor the life style of every individual. Based on the above argument, I believe that it is a matter of personal choice if one wishes to maintain a healthy life style and government has no influence over it.
In conclusion, although it is the government’s responsibility to provide health and fitness benefits, I believe citizens have more responsibility towards maintaining their healthy lifestyle.
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- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
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- Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48048048048 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3896096261 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.1442428031 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 165.909090909 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139422282282 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727003982125 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049919635191 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985522945767 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407226833594 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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