Younger generations are the pillars of every country across the globe upon which development relies heavily. It has been once told by a famous philanthropist - ‘Young people can lead a nation to glory or ashes if misused’. I strongly believe that people of age groups from 16 to 30 are the one who have innovation, skill and potential to drive any country forward and it is always crucial to invest more resources into these citizens.
To begin with, it is always important for a country to use its resources in a rightful manner to reach wide range of people. From the past decade geo politics have become the talking point, due to the war mongering talks across countries like US and North Korea. In such scenarios, government should use resources wisely and invest on development relevant factors such as education, improving skills of people, innovative start-ups - Younger generations should be encouraged and they themselves need to come forward with creative ideas shaping for a better society in solving the nation’s problems. For example, Countries like India have started programs like ‘Make in India’ with the sole intention of encouraging new age talent and handing them the big shoes of big entrepreneurs to fill.
Government funded programs are the best way to send the message to all people whatever generation they may fall into. This sets a platform for citizens to reach and compete in order to achieve their desired result. Whilst this healthy competition leads to improvement among themselves and as a whole take them to a different level.
In conclusion, I think there are plethora of ways to invest resources into younger generations but I feel the best way would be providing public funded programs which encourage them to compete and learn with each other.
- the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 67
- The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people How true do you think of it What is the best way to invest resources 81
- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school Others however believe that girls and boys benefit more from attending mixed schools Discuss both views and give your own opinion 71
- the environment problem facing today's world are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. Government and large companies should responsible for the deducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what 73
- there has been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. write a letter to your managerin your letter:describe the complaints that hav 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a rightful manner" with adverb for "rightful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11148648649 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82738582893 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9668162196 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248353734488 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828457951735 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706427922987 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144315411496 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539058182046 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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