Opinion on whether work-life balance can be achieved, and the reason of why some people can't achieve the desired balance.
Life's goal achievement is considered crucial, though it is difficult to be balanced. There are some people can bond their personal life and work together, others seem to have difficulty to accomplish the balance. In this essay, I will bestow my opinion on the feasibility of merging the line between work-life as well the cause of disability in acquiring life balance on some people.
To begin with, balancing personal activity and work can be tricky without a deep understanding of time management. Splitting time for work too much can lead to an explosion of mind and one will be tired for personal activity. A CEO who is considered hard-working but he will end up living out his family because of his deep concern on his professional. Time management is important indeed to tackle the dilemma of work and life.
The posibility of blending work-life together is in fact high and achievable. People who master in controlling time and not pressuring themselve on one side of life, will easily accomplish a balanced lifestyle.
In conclusion, despite many people cannot achieve their desired balance, it is fully feasible for us to have a simple and balance life. I strongly believe that, in the future the work-life balance will be achievable with a proper time management method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02803738318 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87255119254 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9909687987 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8181818182 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365128997379 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141770067496 0.0925447433944 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064347518395 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227580188966 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812687868157 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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