Give examples from your experience. In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. What is your opinion?

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Give examples from your experience. In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. What is your opinion?

One of the most contentious issues today relates to how tourism creates adverse effects to developed countries. In this essay, I will explore the advantages and disvantages of promoting tourism in developed countries before giving my opinion on the issue.

One of the most cited advantages of tourism is cultural promotion. The reason for this is that local residents often lack of financial support from the government, hence with the arrival of tourists, they will have a chance to improve their economy. In addition, tourism will also help local diversity to be exposed internationally via commercial. For example, Vietnam tourism has been grown exponentially after a new law which helped local to have better sales has been imposed from the government.

However, an commonly mentioned disadvantage of tourism is environmental sustainability. I often argue that in fact environment is far more crucial than economic benefit because residents will be consequently harmed by toxic from travel's boat and many other vehicles. Furthermore, the loss of privacy which disturbs the peacefullness of the local nature also contributes negatively to the adversary of tourism. For instance, a small town in NSW has experienced a huge loss of local properties because of the recent booming in tourism.

In conclusion, introducing tourism into developed country has been proven to be more harmed than good, though it is essential for the development of a nation. Despite the economic opportunity, tourism seems to damage the core value of a nation. In my opinion, the government should carefully scrutinise and impose more rules and law towards tourism industry in order to protect local community.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37969924812 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03192400546 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4651257989 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.076923077 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.25397266985 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174371346281 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645029476331 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332278108498 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113046290122 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331259121851 0.0609392437508 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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