Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
History is replete with miscellaneous events and persons by following of which all of us can profit since it can be extremely instructor. A question about the embedding the history course in schools, a controversial one, is whether taking history class should be obligatory for all children or not. I- for one- subscribe to the idea of making history class mandatory for all young people, on the ground that they can learn many lessons from history, they will get more familiar with the world, and find their role model.
To begin with, history has various invaluable lessons for everyone in their life. Reading the biography of people, war occurrences, and other events, people would be able to figure out the mistakes that had irreparable consequences. For example, they can see how villain ambition of some kings led to massacres and death of thousands of people, and how hard they ancestors attempted to reach today's situation in society. Therefore, they learn how much peacefulness is precious and we should try to keep it.
Secondly, reading about contemporary history, children can get familiar with the events that contribute to establish our today's country. They know about the adjacent realms that affected their country. Also, they learn how the borders were in past and how neighbor areas can have similarities, because political peripheries were different.
Last but not least, history is filled with biography of great leaders, whether politicians, economists, or religious ones, to name but a handful, in which students can find some common qualities pushing them toward success and distinguishing them from ordinary people. Thus, children can find their role model among them to pursue their desires. For instance, reading the history, I find Gandhi a great man worthy of emulation, since he had many charming attributes that is ideal to be a great person in the world.
All in all, I do believe that children must know about the history as a part of their school curriculum, because they can be more resourceful, know the world, and find their hero. Who can refuse the astounding gains of studying history?
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- the possibility of flying the ancient pterosaurs 90
- the possibilty of the use of an ancient weapon by the Greeks in a war against the Romans 73
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09742120344 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70416374123 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5521609811 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151782300167 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596805263064 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489294540742 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933239256882 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569112641806 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.