Women are said to be the symbol of love care and sensitivity and thus, a segment of society opines they should not work where power or strength is needed more, like police force. This essay strongly disagree the suggestion and will give reasons further.
Being a woman does not always means softness instead there are many women out in our society who very effectively proved that they are not less than men. To strengthen my point, I would like to shed some light on few ladies:- 1. Phoolan Devi- a bandit who stood for women assaultment ( though she followed illegal path herself), 2- Kiran Bedi- first Indian police service officer.
Moreover, there are many crimes which are not dire one and a little punishment like rehabilitation or non custodial sentence is required and that’s where a woman can play a better role. For example felony crimes, pick pocketing etc by juveniles are few issues where more than punishment, monitoring their activities and teaching them the consequences of wrongdoing is more required. And a women can do it far better.
Lastly, women feel much safer with a women only. When crimes are related to the ladies like rapes, they can speak out their hearts only in front of the one where they feel secured.
Hence, I strongly demur the above mentioned suggestion. Rather, I believe, community should motivate women to do whatever they want to do as women already proved their excellence everywhere.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...rther. Being a woman does not always means softness instead there are many women o...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a bandit who stood for women assaultment though she followed illegal path herself...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...ces of wrongdoing is more required. And a women can do it far better. Lastly, women ...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
.... Lastly, women feel much safer with a women only. When crimes are related to the la...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
... Lastly, women feel much safer with a women only. When crimes are related to the la...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, lastly, moreover, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95867768595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52361295801 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665289256198 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8606276569 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154037673287 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572522221688 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432805850074 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852075807405 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279744614949 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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