What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why?
It is irrefutable to say the world has benefitted immensely in the last century because of the technological advancement. Not only in medical but the technical achievement cannot be ignored either. In this following essay I will be discussing about the salient discoveries concerning about the technical advancements and deduce to a conclusion after mentioning its boon in the modern society.
To begin with, we have used computes for multitasking purposes from many years now, whether its home, schools or banks its use has overgrown tremendously, because of its accuracy and efficiency. For instance, tedious mathematical problems, or the records of employee in organization or the paperless transactions, only because of the computers one can achieve those. So, there are immense propitious of computers.
Furthermore, computes with the programmable software, internet, and addition of artificial intelligence has created technological revolution. For instance, according to the New York Times billions of dollars are invested in Silicon Valley for development of new technology. The repercussion of that has resulted in colossal technical advancement, which has made world a better place to live.
To recapitulate, it’s not an easy task to judge any invention, but the computers with integration of programmable software has contributed in medical and making advancement in the airline sector immensely. Undoubtedly, computes are one of the best inventions so far.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69230769231 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36730638312 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5504705167 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103148904124 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349129287017 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371328510767 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587095423193 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352170740498 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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