You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr.Smith,
My name is Ekaterina. I and my family are tenants in your accommodation. We entered into a contract three months ago. I am writing this letter to complain the condition of the bed.
Problems with the bed have started since Aprile. Moreover, our mattress is in a bad condition too. It became rough and I feel like I am Princess on the Pea. But, the main reason of the complain is the bed, which squeaks and wobbles unbearably. At the begining, this was not so uncomfortable and unusable, but this is becaming more and more inconvenient for us.
Therefore, I would like you to replace it to another one or fix it. I hope that the bed is replaced or repaired as soon as possible. Otherwise, I afraid that someday we will crash from this bed and will be damaged.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ekaterina Bots
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, My name is Ekaterina. I and my fami...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ess on the Pea. But, the main reason of the complain is the bed, which squeaks and wobbles u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, therefore, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67973856209 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84001782143 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5653441262 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.0769230769 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124345785873 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428938963994 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459126160591 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06559309593 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404299252845 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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