Over the past decade, the food industry had tremendous growth and improvements. The demand for convenience food, due to the busy lifestyle of many people, is now on the rise around the globe. This essay will analyse both the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
On the one hand, it is obvious that the convenience food is more beneficial precisely for modern society. Wasting lessen time for cooking at home, people should consume these type of food. They not only can be made easier and faster, but also more affordable than meals which can be cooked at home. Cup noodles, for example, are a well-known instant food which are ready to be eaten by simply adding hot water in it. In addition, ready-made meals are budget friendly and a desirable option for people who are live in a tight budget.
On the other hand, this trend has some drawbacks. Firstly, many people believe that this type of food may cause ailments such high blood pressure, cardio vascular diseases and obesity problems. This is due to the fact that people are not able to save enough time for preparation of home-made meals. Secondly, the inactivity of a person can lead to less burning of fat in the body resulting in an accumulated weight. Moreover, the presence of fast foods are prevalent in every corner of the streets, making it the ultimate choice. Furthermore, the excess consumption of fats and sugar that cannot be burned to energy will be deposited in the human body as unwanted fats.
In conclusion, the merits and demerits of this trends are numerous. However, after analysing both sides, it is felt that the convenience food are less time consuming and more diverse outweighs the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6122559547 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3901023113 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209513422223 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069617353854 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630068001615 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137314188816 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060978263326 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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