Nowadays, we live in a modern world where meaning of everything is changed. One of these subjects is position of old people. In the past, children felt a big responsibility to take care of their parents, however today this kind of feeling is ver rarely. Some people prefer to take a professional help to take care of old people and other people are not agree with this.
On the one hand, some people have opinion that it is the duty and responsibility of the families to help their old aged family members. Fits of all, a whole of elderly's life has been given for their kids and families such as live, love care and wealth, and become isolated people from the lovely community that they grow in is hurt. In addition, these people have sacrificed their golden years of life to fulfill the requirements of their children and now they require support of them then they should deserve that. As per the statement, "Blood is thicker than water", people's instinct is to live in groups, especially with their family members. Moreover, there should be a care-giver from a family for elderly people to give unconditional care, since after all everyone eventually will have to pass through old age sooner than later. If they were unable to do so, they should hire a maid to help them look after the elderly but at the same time to constantly provide the emotional and physical support for the members.
On the other hand, some people argue that it has been a traditional that most of the elderly would spend their remaining life in retirement village because of facilities that they offered. Firstly, nursing home provide professional service such as nurse that work 24/7 to meet and looking after their "Activity of Daily Living" which include eating, drinking, exercising, etc. Secondly, there are only elderly peers which could keep them company in retirement houses. Finally, they are mostly located far away from the city centre. So it will be quieter and more peaceful for them to spend the rest of their life.
In conclusion, merits and demerits of this trend are numerous. However, after analysing both sides, it is felt that aged people could benefit more at retirement homes. Not only because of professional nurses and doctors, but also because they could have fun with peers. Of course, environment and facilities are also an essential reason why elderly should be send to retirement homes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...wever today this kind of feeling is ver rarely. Some people prefer to take a professio...
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Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sent'?
Suggestion: sent
... essential reason why elderly should be send to retirement homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, after all, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90487804878 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58355781233 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1116654031 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.842105263 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5789473684 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36842105263 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244288810214 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670607497969 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500761045297 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136089669047 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037513954438 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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