Nowadays, a lot of adult children send their parents to old-age homes. Many people think that nursing home is necessity as it helps to keep old people safe, instead of letting them alone in the house.
First and foremost, I believe the adult children should support their parents financially and emotionally. Parents play the most important role in a child's life. They give them values, manners, love and care. They try their best to give their child the ideal life they could imagine. So, children should not run for their responsibilities, they should take good care of their parents as good as their parents' did when the were young.
On the other hand, if the family members cannot afford the cost of a nursing home, the government should take necessary measures for making comfort and ease in senior people lives. Senior citizens have made valuable contributions to the country's betterment in the past. The government should not acknowledgement this fact but also value their contribution. Therefore, any responsible government should take action to protect and care for the elders in their old age. It is also fair because it serves as a reward for a life long loyalty to the country.
In conclusion, elderly people have their right to be looked after by both the family and the government to provide them a comfortable lives.
- Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward. mention what they have done to help the community. say what reward 78
- In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?Gi 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...overnment to provide them a comfortable lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64410455332 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7362381358 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8461538462 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274989766618 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959654496426 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701208396123 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167081707572 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556035764698 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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