An unknown person took you to hospital after your incident. He looked after you till your parents arrived. Write a letter to express your thanks
Dear TOM,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for your kindness and care you provided to me during my accident period.
The last thing that I remember before accident is that I was lying in blood and seeking for any help from bypasses. I reminisce that few people just arrived but did not offer any help on accident site and then I got fainted and found myself in hospital with my parents.
My parents told me that you brought me to hospital and also found out about my guardians and asked hospital to inform my parents. Besides, it was too generous that you waited for full night for my patents to arrive and did not even get a blink of sleep. What a big heart you have. I have recuperated well and doctor said that I shall be able to follow normal routine in few weeks. As soon as I am given the permission to walk, I would like to meet you personally and have a coffer with you.
Don’t worry, I know you are too busy in your business but I would not take much time from you.
I am looking forward to meeting with you soon.
Yours sincerely,
PAPA JONES
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear TOM, I am writing this letter to express my g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, so, then, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30731707317 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22401580075 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7540080809 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226293874448 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904965903452 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643648899398 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126379059898 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630374962373 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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