Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
Change is the law of the nature and everything in the world go through the change cycle. Some people embrace the changes and get the new experience of life. On the contrary, there are set of people who like the monotony, that is, not willing to do try new things. I believe that no one can avoid the changes and people should learn to manage the changes effectively.
People who are against the frequent changes in their life style and habits have some rationales. First of all, individuals have been living happily on this planet since the ages by following the old practices and rules. This fact leads that changes are not essentials in life. Secondly, old practices are well tested and established after years of observations so it is always beneficial to follow the same and not to mend the ways in the life. For example, my father believe in home remedy which have been passed by my
Grandfather and believed to be working since decades. Finally, it is believed that changes disrupt the existing life and it takes time to settle with the new changes. Whenever the changes are implemented, people are required to go through transformation process which could be painful and may not be liked by everyone.
However, some people like the changes and advocate that person should changes in accordance with time. It is said that changes not only provide benefits but also give new perspective in life and today’s modern society are adopting the changes very comfortably. Particularly, young people are considered as change enabler. Consequently, new innovations are taking place in our society. Besides this, changes leads to new experience in life and sometime revolutionize the whole society. For instance, changes in telecom field have added new dimension in people’s life and now everyone has adopted the new communication method such as mobile, internet etc.
To sum up, changes bring so many advantages in life, sometime it uproots the evils from society and other, it triggers new innovation. People should adopt the changes to life live happily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...ils from society and other, it triggers new innovation. People should adopt the changes to lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03197674419 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70385562647 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537790697674 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2535670084 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1052631579 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230414107058 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838510421241 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437465087228 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136741897002 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319508075334 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.