The increase in the rate of obesity is leading to an increase in the number of people suffering from heart disease.
What is the reason for the growth in obese people and how can this problem be solved?
The number of overweight people has a tendency to increase in recent years, causing many people have to face with heart-related diseases. A tremendous number of reasons could be the culprit of the mentioned issue, and I think there are some workable solutions to deal with this problem.
Various reasons can be listed to explain why there are more and more people having problem about obesity. One of the reasons is that many junk food and convenient products are being purchased on supermarkets and stores. The interesting and convenience of this kind of product will attract many people, especially teenagers. With high level of fat and cholesterol, fast food will deteriorate people health and cause obesity if people consume them too much. Another reason is the sedentary lifestyle of residents nowadays. Meals containing large portion of meat and lack of fiber are frequently used. Besides, people do not doing exercises regularly. As a result, their weight is uncontrollable, causing catastrophic diseases including heart disease.
However, some feasible measures can be taken to solve this tough problem. Firstly, to reduce the consumption of convenient food, the government should introduce some law or tariff on price of these products. When people need to buy fast food with higher price, they can reconsider about purchasing them and might decide to prepare their own meals. This could decrease the level of fat consumed by people every day. Secondly, individuals should create healthy lifestyle in order to avoid dangerous illness related to overweight. Only by doing exercises regularly and eating healthy can people have a fit body and better wellness.
In conclusion, obesity is extremely dangerous to people’s health, but the problem can be eliminated by efforts of the government and people themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun junk seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much junk', 'a good deal of junk'.
Suggestion: much junk; a good deal of junk
...out obesity. One of the reasons is that many junk food and convenient products are being ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35416666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8181698679 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0506896658 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7058823529 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322981027513 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092798612494 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729811109946 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213925291426 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425035400735 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.