Dear Sean,
I hope you are fine, I am writing this letter to let you know that I have changed my job recently. As you know, I wanted to quit my last job so badly as it doesn't provide me proper wages nor proper timings. While I was browsing the internet I came across a role of supervisor at ABT service, the requirements matched my profile and so I have applied for it. After a couple of round i was selected for face-to-face interview and within next day i got selected for the role.
Its been nearly 3 months since i have joined the company, I enjoy working over here. So far i have learned multi-task skills required for the role. Soon i will be moved over to the head office situated at Dublin. Well, I have given an opportunity to work independently right from the start.
And also I have arranged a birthday party for my dad on 31st of this month. I hope you and girl friend to come over here and have funny with us. Also I have booked a holiday resort the following day so that we would enjoy the sea-side campfire and have some outdoor fun.
See you soon,
Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: you're
Dear Sean, I hope youre fine, Im writing this letter to let you...
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Dear Sean, I hope youre fine, Im writing this letter to let you know i h...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...wanted to change my last job because it doesnt provide me proper wages nor proper timi...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roper timings. I was searching on google , while i came across a role of superviso...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ings. I was searching on google , while i came across a role of supervisor at ABT...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...file and so I have applied for it. After a couple of round i was selected for fac...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...pplied for it. After a couple of round i was selected for face-to-face interview...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...e-to-face interview and within next day i got selected for the role. Its been...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...task skills required for the role. Soon i will be moved over to the head office s...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e moved over to the head office situated at Dublin. Well, I have given an opportu...
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Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'arranged'.
Suggestion: arranged
...right from the start. And also I am arrange a birthday party for my dad on 31st of ...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... come over here and have funny with us. Also I have booked a holiday resort the foll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.355 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38570572206 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9988620598 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10113949597 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355098775233 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681886125298 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577433777678 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538830500886 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.