It is true that most of the industrialized countries trends to cause more pollution eventually creating a major environmental issues. As of matter of fact due to the development of the living standard leads to destruction of forest and other natural minerals. Over time this issue will create a mass destruction to our planet. I totally agree on this view and i will discuss some of the key effects and a temporary solution to over come the issues.
Initially, the luxurious life style of the human being is affecting the surrounding without his sense. Due to technology improvement many artificial products are being replaced the nature. Example: use of AC negated the natural cool air from the trees. Deforestation leading to soil erosion and mineral extraction. This type of living standard will not have a definite future for the next generations. These sort of development need to be reduced and government must take appropriate step to secure the nature resources.
Its been shown in the news that nearly 40% Atlantic Ice berg are evaporating due to environmental cause. Most of the industrial countries produces tons and tons of pollution on a daily basics which causing Ozone depletion and increase in temperature. Not only that, most of the industrial wastage are being deposited in the sea which affects the sea life. The government must take severe actions upon these issue and restrict the production level to minimum. If no actions are taken at a right time, its better to say good bye to our planet. Even the pollution from the vehicle in average causes around 15% destruction to the plant life and breathing air.
In conclusion, the production industries must reduce the amount of the wastage and afforestation must be encouraged around the globe to sustain in this society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'issue'?
Suggestion: issue
...entually creating a major environmental issues. As of matter of fact due to the develo...
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Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lanet. I totally agree on this view and i will discuss some of the key effects an...
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Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y agree on this view and i will discuss some of the key effects and a temporary solution to...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'These nulls'?
Suggestion: This sort; These nulls
...finite future for the next generations. These sort of development need to be reduced and g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, sort of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04362416107 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86438243358 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4566660779 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4117647059 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47058823529 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095301439833 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274204130413 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344801392843 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0539620305975 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287432031211 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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