Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
A few subjects are likely to provoke controversy as police’s guns and its effects on violence. A number of people think that police officer carries firearms could lead to higher level of violence. I partly agree with this view.
On the one hand, there are various drawbacks when allowing protection team bring weapons. Firstly, this policy might trigger the wrong perception in the mind of young adolescents that possessing weapons is acceptable, unconsciously, breeding future offenders. Another reason would be that it could witness a large amount of innocent dead by police. A good example of this case is that in New Zealand, there have been almost 40 people shot to head by police in the last 70 years when most of those cases could have been solved with something more moral.
On the other hand, it is reasonable that police are entitled to carry guns. Policemen and policewomen have right to use guns in order to protect themselves and citizens from aggressive individuals and criminal groups. In reality, criminals are escalating alarmingly and governments should take a policy of zero to tolerance like equipping modern weapons to reduce the crime rate. In addition, guns can be used as the last resort to resolve the heightened and emerged situations. For instance, in Viet Nam, protection team are allowed to use guns to retrain perilous breakers such as murderers and human traffickers.
After discussing all the points mentioned above, it is, therefore, safe to conclude that there are several demerits when entitling police officers to equip guns, however, I strongly believe that they should be using them with the aim of protecting society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12867647059 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71591162042 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.506572817 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174335463118 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627695928475 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745718396062 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111598234543 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068446233404 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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