A society must be comprehended by analyzing the whole elements that compose it. The big cities located in a certain society has an important role in understanding a society, however it might not be enough to have a broader knowledge about a people or a nation. In this context, not only the major cities should be a matter of study but other social environments.
One might argue that in the big cities it’s possible to understand the way a society behaves itself, since in these cities it’s possible to find people all around the country sharing a similar way of life. Take New York city as an example. Many people might argue that a study about the dynamics in this city might be crucial to understand the America Way of Life. In New York, it’s possible to understand how United States society behave towards work life, cultural expressions, political divisions, health life, etc. In this context, it’s also possible to look for other big cities to have understand a little better the nuances that composes this society.
However, to do an analysis like that might create a very biased perspective about a certain society. Using the New York example, one scientist might discover that people that lives in this city has a very bad behavior toward food. As a consequence, it might be understood that U.S society might have poor habits in relation to what they eat. At the other hand, the research might simply be ignoring that in many other places, like the country side, people might have eat much more healthy food, which can be result in a research that doesn’t have the capacity to analyze broader components within a society.
In this context, it’s very important to not remain only in the major cities when we are trying to understand how a certain people or culture behave themselves. The studies will be more accurate in it tries to understand aspects from different components from this society. Take the case of the Brazil for instance. This country is recognized in the world for it cultural variety and richness. All of these cultural elements could not be analyzed in the major cities of Brazil. The African roots of Brazil might be seen in a major city like Salvador, however this city is far away to have sum up all the elements that composes this reach cultural roots. The same argument goes for indigenous people that also forms the Brazilian culture. The diversity of languages and expressions that many Brazilians indigenous people have cannot be analyzed in cities such as Sao Paulo, because in general these cultural expressions are in the country side of Brazil or located in the Amazon Forest.
Moreover, it’s a misconception to think that all society might have what could be considered a “city”. This perspective imposes an idea that cultures organize themselves in urban spaces, which is not always true. What can be considered a “major city” for people that lives in very remotes places of Asia and that are not familiar with the idea of an urban space? All these elements should be considered.
Thus, it’s very reckless to try to understand a society only studying its major cities, it’s necessary to have a broader perspective about a society in order to understand better the dynimics inside of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: understood
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Message: Use past participle here: 'eaten'.
Suggestion: eaten
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 2235.4752809 123% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96396396396 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68029752185 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41981981982 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1888878801 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968833774894 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03762121098 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267235300717 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672452636286 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02545734407 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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