With the high proliferation of the mass media, we are entering a new era of information explosion. We absorb a lot of information on hourly daily basis ranging from the political campaign to cutting-edge medical discovery. Some contend that TV and movies have a bright side on the people's behavior when it comes to teaching them good communication skill which is a crucial element in their later lives. However, from my own experience and actual observation of the life makes me believe that the TV and movies have negative repercussion on the people's morality. I will aptly substantial my views below.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the rate of the crime is now escalating due to the violent fighting scenes and storyline of some films as well as some TV programs. In some movies, in order to boost the audience attraction; they might add some scary element, and violent scene such as sibling may turn back over each other because of the legacy, the spouse might think of murder since he is afraid that his affairs might be found by the beloved one, and a protagonist in order to save a hostage; he might kill good-bad people with destructive weapons. All of these stories might mislead the youth to imitate the characters' words and behaviors. To be more specific the youth somewhat is the only people who might be misleading because they are not mature enough and do not have enough real experience that help them to judge what is right and what is wrong.
I vividly remember an article that I read in New York Time newspaper which showed some statistics 80 % of the crime now in our hectic society because of increasing exposure people to violent movies. As you can see this piece of evidence that witnessed the negative impact of some TV program.
Another reason that deserves more word is that the morality has torn apart due to misleading information introduced by social media. In our ancient time, the people hard for them to imagine that the others could deceive them " Loyalty is quality." If the other do that or think to set up a trap for them, they would be despised by the others. However, Nowadays due to many changes in our society, For the sake of one's interest, they can do anything whatever the cost " the trust is being diminished". This incident brought up by many TV series such as Desperate Housewives, Gossip Girl. I will give an example from my personal experience to shed light on that subject, My son Steven when he was 15 years old; he watched movies about a group of youth who would like to forget their problems through drinking alcohol and drugs. But the question they want to get money to cover that expenses; they started to steal their parents. My son gets caught in a big crisis which was; he was not able to attend medical school because he did not Ace the exams. So, he thought the only to forgot his dilemma by drinking alcohol as he saw in the movie That taught him a bad temper. Because of his dad, we were able to save his life. From what I mentioned Some film has a detrimental effect on the people's behavior.
Admittedly, there is some program has bright side such as some educational programs which helps students in their studies, and some healthy program has a positive impact on their lifestyle which encouraged them to eat a healthy diet or do exercise to remain healthy which has a light effect on their productivity.
As all things considered, even though, the TV programs have a favorable effect but the negative side is far outweighed because of it is regarded as the main reason for increasing the crimes and decline the morality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2998.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 640.0 407.700716846 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.684375 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02973371873 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57874775947 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 325.0 212.727598566 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5078125 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 938.7 618.680645161 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4012210607 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.347826087 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8260869565 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12321184556 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347095214064 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358860569015 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686150640922 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227645627664 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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