TPO INTEGRATED 43
There has been some debates among whether the angostide were living in the past. The reading provides three different theories about where they were living in the past. The lecture refutes, saying that each of the theories has some weakens.
The first area of dispute is the ability of the agnostide to live as free swimming predator. The lectures contends that free swimming predators should have large developed eye and special sensory organs in their bodies to help them catch the prey, however the angistoids were lacking these characteristics. On the other hand, the reading opposes this point stating that they were strong predators and active swimmers.
Another controversial issue that the agntoid were dwellers of the sea flower. The lecture says that the dwellers of the sea flower were moving slowly. They localized in one area. However, angistoids were moving too fast. According to their fossils they were localized in different places. But, the reading contradicts this point saying that they were living as dweller of the sea flower and scavenging dead organism and grazing bacteria.
The final point of dispute is that agnostide were parasites living on large organisms. The lecture claims that the parasites population should be small or they will kill the hosts they feed on them. , I according to the fossils of angostide there population very large and that contradict the theory of parasites.yet , the reading refutes this point and saying that many anthropoids that are living those days are parasite, which reflect that agnosite were parasite also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h of the theories has some weakens. The first area of dispute is the ability of...
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...tide to live as free swimming predator. The lectures contends that free swimming pr...
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Message: You should probably use 'contend'.
Suggestion: contend
...as free swimming predator. The lectures contends that free swimming predators should hav...
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...m catch the prey, however the angistoids were lacking these characteristics. On t...
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...strong predators and active swimmers. Another controversial issue that the agn...
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...calized in one area. However, angistoids were moving too fast. According to their...
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...g dead organism and grazing bacteria. The final point of dispute is that agnos...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parasites'' or 'parasite's'?
Suggestion: parasites'; parasite's
... organisms. The lecture claims that the parasites population should be small or they will...
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...uld be small or they will kill the hosts they feed on them. , I according to the ...
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Suggestion: ,
...will kill the hosts they feed on them. , I according to the fossils of angostide...
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...ll kill the hosts they feed on them. , I according to the fossils of angostide t...
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Suggestion: ,
...t contradict the theory of parasites.yet , the reading refutes this point and sayi...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ich reflect that agnosite were parasite also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 256.0 270.72406181 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2421875 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54035395827 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51953125 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.7988133651 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4666666667 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06452816374 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322462412258 0.272083759551 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116181049573 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574355705006 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196993539687 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483186432104 0.0443174109184 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.