You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
explain what you like about the cafeteria
say what is wrong with it
suggest how it could be improved
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Magazine,
You have become so popular that every students wait for your monthly edition and indeed you are ear and mouth of our college. Further, I am going to provide my personal perspective about cafeteria and believe some changes may bring not only improvement but also make it favorite even more.
Every students love cafeteria so am I, the lunches particularly South India dishes are mouthwatering and that too at subsidized cost. Besides, the prompt service of staff makes it perfect place for hand-out.
Nevertheless, for last two months, I have been not very comfortable about hygiene in cafeteria especially at outdoor part of it. First of all, it is rarely kept tidy and clean resulting bees and other insects hover on the food which is dangerous for health. Secondly, in summer time, there are no arrangements of fans or cooler.
In order to make our cafeteria a better place, I recommend that more cleaning staff should be hire so that standards of hygiene can be further improved. In addition, more outdoor fans can reduce the heat level for people sitting at outdoor cafeteria.
I hope that my suggestion will be taken seriously and shall be worked upon.
Yours sincerely,
TATA
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 291, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...nt but also make it favorite even more. Every students love cafeteria so am I, the lu...
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Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents love cafeteria so am I, the lunches particularly South India dishes are mout...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...h is dangerous for health. Secondly, in summer time, there are no arrangements of fans or c...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hired'?
Suggestion: hired
...mend that more cleaning staff should be hire so that standards of hygiene can be fur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98514851485 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.639022501 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69801980198 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3397533448 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5454545455 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 4.34317383033 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171118828937 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593170013009 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469548786919 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782011394609 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037685978717 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.