You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day.. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
• explain what you like about the cafeteria
• say what is wrong with it
• suggest how it could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to provide my feedback regarding the canteen service which is located in our college premises.
To begin with, I think the staff is highly educated with respect to the knowledge of the cuisines served to the students. This is particularly helpful for me as I have certain restrictions on dietary product intake. However, I would like to criticize certain aspects of the food quality being served during lunchtime.
The meals served are at times invariably cold and extremely greasy. I think that it should be freshly prepared because this can detrimentally impact the health of an individual. Also, the staff is unable to handle a vast number of orders during this time. As a result, students have to wait in long queues at the food counter. Moreover, the prices of lunch meal have suddenly increased drastically when compared with the fares for last year.
Therefore, I would like to suggest some improvements. Firstly, the head chef can be retrained to prepare meals using fresh ingredients. Secondly, more staff could be employed to handle orders during lunch times. Lastly, the managing committee must revise the sudden upsurge in prices. Please do not hesitate to contact me if need any further details.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Heena Parmar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, as a result, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1095890411 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65344347707 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689497716895 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3767122752 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9375 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15180777929 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448154062592 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370947993354 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715538410926 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136189535535 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.