An increase in production of consumer goods result in damage of the natural environment . What are the reasons and possible solutions.
An increment can be seen in manufacture of customer products that create a lot of problems to environment . The chief reason behind this phenomenon an aristocratic lifestyle offered solution recycle old products and use again.
To embark with, it is true that, population is increaseing day by day. So that to fulfill their desire and provide comfort life style to them. Companies and business manager have to manufacture that that things which is useful in their daily routine . They throw their old products which are harmful to the environment . Moreover, due to these goods individuals can show their status in society and in front of other people. For example , most of individuals have hefty sum of money in this modern era. They spend money on gedgets . Namely car, bike and mobile so on. Automobile and bike create pollution in the atmosphere. That pollution stems many disease and effect on environment.
Nevertheless, government should aware people and society to use old products which products are not working it should be repaired and use it again and again in their life. When they using that products they do not need to buy new goods with the help of these things people can contribute to solve environment problems. Furthermore, avoiding non biodegradable products masses do not worry about these things they use and throw outside which is not mixed in garbage . It remain same . So it leads a lot of problems . Individuals should use biodegrable things with the help of these steps people can save the environment.
To sum up, there are many reasons which pollutes atmosphere. Thus. In my point of view government and people should share their responsibility to overcome this problems and reuse the products and use again and again.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-22 | kuldeep sharma | 100 | view |
| 2018-05-30 | lovy | 61 | view |
- Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming more dependant on each other While other say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- The gap between the rich and poor is becoming wider the rich are getting richer and the poor are even more poorer what problems can this solution causes and suggest solutions 78
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games Discus 39
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on outdoor sports Why is it a positive or negative development 71
- Some people say that government should brake down all the historical building and replace them with modren buildings. Do you agree or disagree. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t can be seen in manufacture of customer products that create a lot of problems ...
^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acture of customer products that create a lot of problems to environment . The c...
^^
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...create a lot of problems to environment . The chief reason behind this phenomenon...
^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s which is useful in their daily routine . They throw their old products which are...
^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cts which are harmful to the environment . Moreover, due to these goods individual...
^^
Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd in front of other people. For example , most of individuals have hefty sum of m...
^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
...in front of other people. For example , most of individuals have hefty sum of money in this modern...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of individuals have hefty sum of money in this modern era. They spend money on ...
^^
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... modern era. They spend money on gedgets . Namely car, bike and mobile so on. Aut...
^^
Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...modern era. They spend money on gedgets . Namely car, bike and mobile so on. Auto...
^^
Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Namely,
...ern era. They spend money on gedgets . Namely car, bike and mobile so on. Automobile ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 647, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...in the atmosphere. That pollution stems many disease and effect on environment. Nevertheles...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Nevertheless, government should aware people and society to use old products w...
^^^
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d use it again and again in their life. When they using that products they do not ne...
^^^^
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Furthermore, avoiding non biodegradable products masses do not worry about these...
^^
Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ow outside which is not mixed in garbage . It remain same . So it leads a lot of p...
^^
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'remains'?
Suggestion: remains
...side which is not mixed in garbage . It remain same . So it leads a lot of problems . ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...is not mixed in garbage . It remain same . So it leads a lot of problems . Individ...
^^
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ain same . So it leads a lot of problems . Individuals should use biodegrable thi...
^^
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ems . Individuals should use biodegrable things with the help of these steps peop...
^^
Line 6, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p, there are many reasons which pollutes atmosphere. Thus. In my point of view go...
^^
Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...any reasons which pollutes atmosphere. Thus. In my point of view government and peo...
^^^^
Line 6, column 156, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... share their responsibility to overcome this problems and reuse the products and use...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01724137931 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73961178389 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520689655172 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8172055248 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12618628034 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036771270452 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453357472075 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924874188972 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505514971698 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.