Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cellphone) or a service (e.g medical treatment) do you agree or disagree?
It is thought by some people that price of commodity or service is essential while buying it. In my opinion, budget along with necessity is essential while buying product of daily use or luxury item whereas in services such as medical treatment price cannot be considered.
It is imperative to think about budget and necessity of product of daily use before buying it. As companies nowadays come up with very lucrative advertisements, it is very normal to fall into the trap of such offers so it become essential to give price of commodity a thought along with its usability. With invent of e-commerce websites like Amazon, Flipkart and Alibaba, products have become approachable with debit cards/ credit cards which often leads to overspending and buying of unnecessary products. This is the reason with many millennials struggle with finances. As per recent study by Department of Finance people between ages 25 to 35 spend around 95% of their salary and likely to struggle with financial crunch at later stages of their life.
On the other hand, things like medical treatment and services where price cannot be considered. Even though medical treatments are quite expensive, budget constraints on medical expenses cannot be put as someone’s life is depends on service. These type of expenses are rare but main reason behind diligent planning of budget as per income and refrain from overspending.
In conclusion, people should be frugal in spending on products of daily use or luxury items and save money for emergency medical expenses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...fall into the trap of such offers so it become essential to give price of commodity a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15079365079 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74037172446 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7601582193 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192537523465 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835566262051 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727025045658 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131223129005 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709420794021 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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