modern technology allow machine to perform the hard work instead of human? does this have positive or negative effect on people give your opinion with example

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modern technology allow machine to perform the hard work instead of human? does this have positive or negative effect on people give your opinion with example

Nowadays majority of people are depending on machines.The machines are making life easier in many area agriculture,medical.With the help of machine people done work in few minute.In other way it create many problem in our life.This essay will discuss both side positive or negative.
To begin with its positives,the machines are helpful in the medical world to cure fatal disease through cardiac or surgical operation.As a result it uplift the standard of health. Machines are making farmer life is easier. so that he can barely do difficult things easily with tractor,combine,cultivator etc.Also computers,printers, photocopier print and store limitless data for long time.
on negative side over excessive on machine reduce the physical labor.Therefore many diseases have arisen. forthur it replaced human work.This machine have made a thousand of the worker unemployed taking their place in every field which has created many obstacles individual to earn their bread and butter.As a result it has proved the bain for society or as all.
In my opinion this trend has some positive but a lot negative effect on society as well as planet.In order to live healthy life we need the reduce dependence on machines.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30729166667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4593372037 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697916666667 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.385702263 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.571428571 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198533402701 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820796536659 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386415877105 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111889213107 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276521919259 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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