At the present time, sports help in binding different countries, ignoring the disputes and building friendship. It is believed by some people that international sports meet promote peace, brotherhood. I completely agree that having these events celebrated curb terrorism and enhance harmony.
To start with, the biggest global event is Olympics where several games are conducted and people from all the countries gather to watch and enjoy, thus sharing the pleasure together. Next, the national anthem played at the beginning of the sport is seen as a sign of patriotism, both the players and spectators get emotionally involved in the feeling of pride for one's own country. Besides this, intercontinental sports also acts as an ice-breaker among politicians of war ravaging countries to talk in a more sophisticated manner. This helps to spread the message of oneness and unity in diversity.we cannot refute the fact that it gives immense joy when the spirit of the game overcomes the petty barriers of countries and cultures because national teams often have players from different ethnicity and backgrounds.
Secondly, Common wealth games, ICC world cup, Twenty 20, and FIFA are widely organised and participated by more than 200 countries. We can see that, after the cricket match players congratulating and cheering up each other for their success and hard work. For example: Neighboring countries, India and Pakistan are on good pace in terms of sports and the cricketers of 2 countries are good friends outside the cricket ground. It also strengthens the relationship among countries, as the spirit and virtue of the player is seen and not the enmity with that country.
To reiterate, International sports events guide the nations in the direction of peace, harmony, brotherhood promoting non-violence and to believe in Unity is Strength. So, in my opinion sports bring world peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31561461794 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88379747897 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637873754153 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7845416564 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221133346995 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820788180126 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854367317746 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157301720512 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10714653123 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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