Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
• Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
• Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Johnson,
Recently, I have started to study a course on management at FTA community college here at Mordor. Due to the intense education schedule, I would like to ask for a one week leave to concentrate on my studies.
Also, I would like to suggest that I work an extra shift every day for a week after my return if you agree to this request. This way, at the end of the month, my total hours of work will not be changed. I have already asked a colleague to fill my position during my absence.
I must add, the qualification that I am currently perusing will be beneficial for the company in many ways. For one, it will help the office to run more efficiently. Moreover, it will help the company to be more presentable to the visiting authorities in the upcoming month because we can employ newer methods that are being taught in the course.
I look forward to hearing your decision.
Yours sincerely,
John Doe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54437869822 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61199544791 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650887573964 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3646169129 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185950314134 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734926100702 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292478963367 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954244220489 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157379683905 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.