Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one knows whether starting early on doing household is beneficial for children. Certainly, some people if asked would agree with the statement that children should be stay focus on their homework ,while others would mention that the question depends on a great deal of factors; for example, some parents care more about children’s academic performance. As far as I’m concerned, I adopt a firm position that kids will benefit greatly from doing household chores.
First of all, it’s important to consider children’s responsibility. Certainly, some people may think that doing household chores can not built children’s responsibility. However, in most cases the building of children’s responsibility is starting with small things. To illustrate that idea let’s consider the following example. I remember when I was 8 years, parents ask me to dusting furniture, wishing dished and so on. This in turn helps me understand that if I did not do such household tasks regularly, the environment of house could be a terrible mess. As you can see, such tasks teach me being responsible for the place I living in.
Equally important is developing kids’ independence. Of course, for some people in some situations, parents need to take care everything, because they are too young to know how to do things. However, it would be fair to say that for most people will hold the opposite opinion. Take a case of CJ’s story, a friend of mine whom I’ve known for 10 years. when he was young, he began to be involved with his father’s business. This experience taught him how to operate the company, and in the near future he started his own company. In my opinion, doing household tasks not only benefit children’s personality, but these also developed children’s independence.
Finally, some people may think that children should have more recess time to focus their school ’s assignments. I’ll be first to admit that doing household may decrease their academic performance. Despite this possibility, I prefer to maintain my stance on this issue. By way of example, I can remember that one of my college classmate, Nick, who was doing well is college and got a perfect grades. But he can not live without his parents, it causes him studying graduate school in Taiwan rather than study abroad. I think that this is the case for many other people as well.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that doing household will benefit greatly to children. Not only will build children’s responsibility but also develop independence. That’s why everyone should let children do household tasks in earlier age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, i think, of course, first of all, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24942791762 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07869713865 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54004576659 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5359054734 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2307692308 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8076923077 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26923076923 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189157820063 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583450415864 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504135755314 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126042153504 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418369619366 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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