modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree
modern technology is changing our world .This has advantages such as bringing people together through communication. it also has disadvantages such as destroying differences between cultures. To what extent agree or disagree
with the advent of newer technologies in the field of communication, people could come under one umbrella. It has adversely affected to some of the communities by mixing up of different cultures to form a new one. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above mentioned statement.
On one hand, it became much easier and convenient for the people to gather with a common vision on a particular subject or a specific idea, because of the newer inventions , which made conveying of a message much easier. For instance, in a protest which was organised against the current government of Egypt in 2014, nearly 40,000 people participated merely with a three days of advertisements through the social medias. Hence this newer explorations became inevitable and pivotal in the human's life.
on the other hand, the newer advancements in this area became a ground and helped to expand the globalization, which gradually helped other cultures to intrude into the indigenous communities. In other words, it mixed the cultures with one another to form a new one. For example most of the Indian Metropolitan cities are following western traditions, mainly in the field of fashion and in their dietary habits, as the western companies took the Upper Hand in these in the Cities.
in conclusion, though it is inevitable that a minor drawback to happen with any new inventions, but the advancement particularly in the field of communication made humans to travel a long distance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21818181818 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04763992554 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8077730123 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283305337208 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126035104792 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204383699698 0.0667982634062 306% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230441487933 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.38609752731 0.056905535591 678% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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