Media as well as technology,having played a crucial part,become a part and parcel of our life .The absence of both on the one side making one feel like handicapped lags the echelons behind in the post modern era .Some people opine that the media is the root cause of sedantry behaviour while few others refute it .Prior to my opinion ,I would try to throw a shed light on the said topicin the upcoming paragraphs.
Media has engulfed the world like a canopy in the forests ,which has further left a negative impression on the minds of the masses getting to become one of the pivotal reasons for the hyphenated identities leading to the misbehaviour of people .Moreover,nuclearisation of families being one of the root causes transforming the young ones introvert as well as alionated ,also leaves their mind upset.
To add on ,youngsters are getting to lose their conscience by having drugs ,that are being commercialised with the help of media and technology giving a way to fatal results .Inappropriate guidance and counselling has led them to kick their own bucket.Being immature sometimes getting twined to irrationalists leads to their worse behaviour which has basically another fact behind it ,that is the generation gap.
The gist of the topic is that whether media plays as an antagenist in this movie of life but on the flip side it has to be moreand more effctive lacking adscencity and quality in advertisements and to become a protagenist in the life of jiveniles as well as adults.
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In modernization era,
In modernization era, technology has been developed and its impact can be seen on today's generation. Some masses believe that youngsters have become lazy and disrespectful due to the media. While others think that other factors are also influent them. I have diplomatic views which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
In modern epoch, everyone is running behind the money. Owing to it,parents do not have time to spend with their children. They hire some professionals to take care of them and those persons are not giving them appropriate attention which they get from their parents. So the children have lack of moral values. Apart from this, the environment influences the juveniles behaviour. Whatever, they will see from their surroundings, they will learn those manners. In addition, impact of nuclear family make the young ones introvert. Therefore , whenever the children meet other people or relatives they misbehave with them.
On the other hand, nowadays, media has become a very powerful source of entertainment.So adults are spending their most of the time to watch television. There are many serials which make a bad impact on the children. They show that how a child can fulfill their demands. So, they misbehave with their parents to fulfill their desires. For example - children start throwing things to show their anger for the desirable things.
To conclude, if the children are disrespecting their parents it does not mean that it is influence of media, environment and parents are also responsible for this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90980392157 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12211050573 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.1666108132 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 313.0 106.682146367 293% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.75 20.7667163134 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14173255678 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754425157098 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309408666343 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754425157098 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309408666343 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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